Thread:Lumage/@comment-26959328-20160129001808/@comment-14600979-20160129023250

Oh, it's good.

Maybe I'm blind and just can't see it but generally you'd have a slightly different shade for the outlines on those black sleeves (and maybe pants). I've seen a black inner and dark grey edge work well.

The symbol on the cap appears to be a pixel or so off from where it wants to be with the angle.

Shoes are a bit undefined, even if they are intentionally subtle. Any hint at features or a distinction between the cuff of the pant would probably make that better imo

Be careful about that zipper disappearing halfway up. I get the feeling you tried it all the way and didn't like it, and it's probably fine, but if it doesn't look the way you wanted maybe extend to that next point.

Otherwise I like it, even the Nazi allusion. Pose is well done and shadings look nice.